Our poem

[A.E.V.]

Here's an idea... why don't we all get creative, and make a poem, all our own!
I can start it, then the next person can add something. Then we could put it together. What do you all think??

I'll start, and we'll see what we can come up with collectively; who's next?



When I feel like I'm in total despair,
I need to know that someone's there.
And when I turn and see your face,
Everything seems to fall into place.

[paul m]

Hello Anne. I think that's a great idea and I hope that others who are better than I at poetry will respond. I will cheer for all you creative people though. Take Care. paul m

[edmbigrl]

To add to the poem -

When I feel like I'm in total despair,
I need to know that someone's there.
And when I turn and see your face,
Everything seems to fall into place.

Then I wonder what I've done wrong
and where all the time has gone.

[AJ]

To add more to the poem -

When I feel like I'm in total despair,
I need to know that someone's there.
And when I turn and see your face,
Everything seems to fall into place.

Then I wonder what I've done wrong
and where all the time has gone.

Out of the darkness
And into the light.

[Froggie]

To add more to the poem -

When I feel like I'm in total despair,
I need to know that someone's there.
And when I turn and see your face,
Everything seems to fall into place.

Then I wonder what I've done wrong
and where all the time has gone.

Out of the darkness
And into the light.

You bring me sunshine when I need it most
How often I have felt like an empty ghost
You cannot understand, yet you are by my side
My true feelings from you will I never hide

[A.E.V.]

keep it coming... it's getting to be awesome!

When I feel like I'm in total despair
I need to know that someone's there
And when I turn and see your face
Everything seems to fall into place.

Then I wonder what I've done wrong
And where all the time has gone
Out of the darkness and into the light
I slowly find courage to keep up the fight.

You bring me sunshine when I need it most
How often I have felt like an empty ghost
You cannot understand, yet you are by my side
My true feelings from you will I never hide.

[Froggie]

I like it too! Let's add some more...

When I feel like I'm in total despair
I need to know that someone's there
And when I turn and see your face
Everything seems to fall into place.

Then I wonder what I've done wrong
And where all the time has gone
Out of the darkness and into the light
I slowly find courage to keep up the fight.

You bring me sunshine when I need it most
How often I have felt like an empty ghost
You cannot understand, yet you are by my side
My true feelings from you will I never hide.

Out in the world I wear this mask
But you talk with me honestly whenever I ask