it's still a rough draft, but I wanted to get some feedback... it's been a while since I've written anything. I know there's something missing, when I figure it out I'll come back and fix it.
so, here goes:
Heartless and haunting…
This disease of the mind
Never-ending, unforgiving…
So cruel and unkind
Hatred, self-loathing…
All torn up inside
Beaten, devastated…
From me I must hide
Sorrow and anger…
Through the chaos and fear
Untrusting, relentless…
Are those voices I hear
Confused and defeated…
So I silently cry
Frustrated, vulnerable…
Just wanting to die
so, here goes:
Heartless and haunting…
This disease of the mind
Never-ending, unforgiving…
So cruel and unkind
Hatred, self-loathing…
All torn up inside
Beaten, devastated…
From me I must hide
Sorrow and anger…
Through the chaos and fear
Untrusting, relentless…
Are those voices I hear
Confused and defeated…
So I silently cry
Frustrated, vulnerable…
Just wanting to die
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